Friday 10 April 2009

the balloon journey 2


1 comment:

Stefanie Hess said...

Hi Johanne, found you! :-) I really like how you have done the colours! The black/grey areas around the bed in the first picture remind me a bit like of being in a cave or cellar, not very comfy places, and therefore match very well with the feelings of the girl, I think... and they make the red balloon even brighter, so that you can already see that it will take a very important part in the story. I'm glad though that the dark outlines are not so strong anymore(at least as far as I can see), they were a bit too comic-like for me, prefer the pencil lines like in the two pics below (the girl with the balloon, this one's great too!)
See you soon! xxx :-)